Do my proposal for Jerry's 32 villa

It seems to polish what's been done can better perfect my proposal always 

1. Corporate experience gaining easy my " positioning " when offer my product and service 

2. The corporate issue I am focus on provide solution are 

- trust 

- team spirits 

- communication 

- corporate culture 

- executive behavior change 

3. The target group 

- YPO corp who familiar with forum 

- service industry which need more trust bounding 

- C suit executive who eager to be a better leader 

- corporate which build the wall ingest of bridges

4. My offering 

- management consulting with forum ( peer group coaching ) and executive coach mechanism 

- corporate forum Parnell with executive coach 

- facilitation on high level dialogue and consensus building 

- high level effective and efficient communication 

Now I am going to apply it to the 3 rd corp client